Monday, August 07, 2006

Lucky Me

 

I put together a little project for the Gloria Film Festival's 7-day Film Challenge. They gave out topics for a film, and all the teams had 7 days to write, film, edit, and hand in a short film based on the assigned topic. Our topic sounded like a fortune cookie, but it made for a fun script.

Our topic was "He who finds discontentment in one place will not likely find happiness in another."

Based on that, I wrote a script with my cousin Stephen, and he and I put together a short film. We didn't use any professional actors, just family members and my next-door neighbor. We didn't even use any lighting. We just put this together in easy, cheep, speedy mode and had a lot of fun.

The film is on the web at http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=55654389498225429&pr=goog-sl

If you'd like to see the other entries from the same contest, they will be screening as part of the opening night festivities for the Gloria Film Festival next Wednesday, August 16. You can get tickets on the Gloria Festival's website. Posted by Picasa

Thursday, June 08, 2006

Shooting for The Lot

I posted a script to the Utah Screenwriters Group to get some feedback. I'm thinking of directing it to submit with my application for the reality show On The Lot.

One of the lines I like from the script:


MANNY
Put down the gun. I’m not armed and
you’re not a killer.

DYSON
Yeah, but I am armed and you are a
killer, so we’ll keep things the way
they are.

Monday, May 01, 2006

Nicely Seasoned

Brandon & Greg premiered "Passing Season" at the Union building at the University of Utah. You can tell they've come a long way since their last film, "Scout's Honor". This is a much better piece for them to show off, and something to be proud of.

What's killing me is I didn't take any pictures at the premiere, and I always take pictures. I think it's because I usually go to these things by myself, but this time I took someone with me. Yeah, it's all her fault. Just like everything else.

Monday, April 10, 2006

Full Court Press

In keeping with the small size of our festival, we received a small amount of press coverage. Utah's arts scene is dominated by a few heavy hitters, like Ballet West and the Capitol Theater, but Stephanie did a good job of attracting press attention.

The line that surprised me was a Deseret News quote from Neil Mandt, the director of Last Stop for Paul.

Neil Mandt . . . is bringing his mock documentary "Last Stop for Paul" to the festival. Mandt said the event "is gaining notoriety as being one of the best-organized festivals in the country and has a reputation for screening top-quality films."

Thanks for the compliment, Neil.


Here's some of the press coverage:

http://deseretnews.com/dn/view/0,1249,635195679,00.html

http://www.sltrib.com/arts/ci_3639662

http://www.standard.net/xx/go/77532/

http://www.ogdencity.com/displayarticle36.html

http://www.echamber.cc/memberpress/foursitestudio.html

Wednesday, March 22, 2006

The Disorganized Organizer

Organizing the film festival has kept me incredibly busy, so I haven't posted in quite some time. I didn't even make it to the screenwriters group meetings in February or March (the March meeting is this Thursday, but I know there's no way I'll be able to break away and attend).



I've decided I'm OK with that. Even though I resolved to write every day this year I decided organizing the festival was going to count as my daily time toward that goal, so I haven't been writing anyway. After the festival next week I will go back to forcing myself to write on a daily basis.



Every time I tell someone I'm the festival organizer, I get asked what that means. So here are my duties in a nutshell. I arrange the hotel accommodations for all the filmmakers coming into town, including their transportation. I also work with all the filmmakers to get the correct versions of the film for screening at the festival, whether that's a 35mm print or a videotape of some kind, and I arrange for any promotional materials they can send, such as posters and flyers. I recruit volunteers to serve as ushers and help with marketing and promotion, and I schedule their volunteer shifts. I arrange a bunch of details with the theater in regards to the volunteers and their duties, and the film prints being stored there. I also have convinced shopkeepers all over the valley to let me hang posters advertising the festival in their windows.



The festival looks like it's going to be great. Here are some of the features we'll be showing.


You Did What?
Directed by Jeff Morris




Bon Appetit
Directed by Justin Lutsky




Last Stop For Paul
Directed by Neil Mandt




Cellar
Directed by Ben Hickernell




Ode
Directed by Gary Shore

Friday, February 03, 2006

Always Another Party


I'm serving as Festival Organizer for the Foursite Film Festival this year. We announced our film selections this week, and last night I sent out acceptance letters to all the filmmakers whose films were selected. Today I have a flood of responses from excited filmmakers. Now my work really begins.

Friday, January 27, 2006

A Bible, A Bible . . .

David Trottier , author of The Screenwriters Bible , came to our screenwriters group  meeting last night and had a short Q&A with our group.


I haven't read the Screenwriters Bible, but last Saturday I went to a screenwriters forum presented by Matt Whitaker  and John Moyer .  John held up The Screenwriters Bible and said it was his favorite book.  I'm an avid reader of anything I think will help my craft, so I picked up a copy.

Thursday, January 26, 2006

(Sun) Dancing All Night

Q&A after 'Wristcutters: A Love Story' with director Goran Dukic and the cast


Saw two more films at Sundance last night.


First I caught "Kiss Me Not On The Eyes", a Lebanese film made by a woman director who grew up in Beirut. The story follows a young woman in Cairo that is fascinated by sensual Arabic poetry, and is training to be a champion belly dancer, but cannot relax herself sexually enough to even sleep with her new husband. Every member of the audience gasped and cringed during the scene where an older woman makes her 12-year-old granddaughter respectable by "excising" her with a razor blade (a home makeshift surgery to cut out her clitoris). It turned my stomach when the credits of the film said 97% of the women in Egypt are excised.


Then I ran at breakneck speed to the Library Theater. I was 119th in the wait list line, but I caught a ticket scalper and made it into the midnight showing of "Wristcutters: A Love Story", a wonderful film starring Patrick Fugit, Shannyn Sossamon, and Tom Waits. In the film, Patrick Fugit commits suicide and ends up in a grimy parallel universe that is the world reserved for people who "offed". When he finds out the girl who broke his heart in the live world has "offed" as well, he sets out to find her on a road trip across a strange, gloomy, nonsensical world filled with bizarre characters. After the film I stood outside and talked to Cameron Bowen, who played a supporting role. We talked for a while and he struck me as a really nice kid.

Monday, January 23, 2006

You're So Sundance




The 10-day party called Sundance has taken over Park City, Utah again. I spent the day pressing through the masses of people.


My favorite part about going to any festival is attending panels and forums, so today I saw a bit of a panel discussion with filmmakers from Iran, Palestine, Lebanon, and Egypt. I attended a gathering for festival organizers. I listened to a Q&A with the still very sexy Ally Sheedy. I met Jeff Wadlow and Beau Bauman, the director and producer of Cry Wolf.


Of course, they also show films at the festival, so at the end of the day I took in "Who Needs Sleep", a documentary about the film industry and the dangerously long hours demanded of film crews. As documentaries go, it wasn't the most perfectly executed. It made its point in the first few minutes, and then spent the rest of the time making the same point over again without much in the way of story structure. Still, I think every person involved in the film industry should see it because the point it raises is valid.

Sunday, January 22, 2006

2nd Place is the First Loser

Our 3-minute spoof of 12 Angry Men won second place in the Audience Choice awards, and received an honorable mention from the judges.

Audience Choice Winners:

#1 - Cassidy's Magic Show (an adorable piece starring a little 6 year-old girl named Cassidy that was a fantastic little actress and about as cute as a kid can be).
#2 - 12 Merciful Men (our film)
#3 - The Light in the Fire (a music-video styled piece about addiction with absolutely gorgeous cinematography and clean, sharply-paced editing to some good music)


Official Winners:

#1 $500 prize - Cassidy's Magic Show (see above)
#2 $200 prize - Spasigba (Three friends throw a birthday party for a Russian foreign exchange student. They try to make the party as Russian themed as possible, but end up just being insulting.)
#3 (tie) $50 prize - The Light in the Fire (see above)
#3 (tie) $50 prize - Loser (A husband and wife play board games. The husband wins every game, and is not a very gracious winner. His wife slaps him around until he apologizes and says he should have let her win like he usually does, which gets him slapped again.)
Honorable Mention - Reunion
Honorable Mention - Light the Tree
Honorable Mention - It Still Burns
Honorable Mention - 12 Merciful Men
Honorable Mention - The Runner
Honorable Mention - Street Saints


I wasn't surprised by the Audience Choice selections. Every member of the audience got to choose three films to vote for, and the three winners were the three I put on my ballot.

I was disappointed, though, that the other two audience choice selections made it into the judges' prize winners and we didn't.

Additional postings about this film on: January 20, January 19, January 15

Friday, January 20, 2006

Three Minutes of Fame (Part II)

Consider this the "Special Features" section of the DVD. Here is a breakdown of the characters we each played. There's a link to watch the film in the previous posting.



We only had five people (the maximum allowed), so we each had to play multiple parts. Of course, we had to make it look like there were twelve men on the jury, so we created this composite shot of all the characters sitting at the table together.



First I played Mr. Confused. Dave did a great job making me look like I have hanging jowls.



Next I played Mr. Rushed. I cracked a joke about someone shaving their head to make their characters look different. Everybody jumped on that idea and decided the bald one should be me. They offered a cash incentive for the razor job, and the amount kept going up all night. When it got to $56 I caved.



Dave is a great makeup artist, and he's the kind of funny, creative guy everybody wants on the set because he keeps us laughing all night. He made his Mr. Foreman a wonderful Wilford Brimley-esque character.



Then Dave shaved his beard down to a goatee and took time away from doing our makeup to sit in a chair as Mr. Sleepy. That's my hairy monkey arm picking lint off his shoulder.



Murray and I co-wrote the script, then Murray directed and still put in performances as three characters, although one of those characters ended up being cut from the show (see final paragraph below). Here, he put several pounds of slimy products in his hair and turned out a great performance as the creepy Mr. Macabre.



Then, Murray shaved his moustache and sat down as the blustery, insulting Mr. Loudmouth.



The workhorse of the night, though, was Greg. Not only was he the cinematographer and the editor, but he put in four characters. Here he slicked his hair, and what started as a Vincent Price impersonation kept getting more over the top until he did nothing but squawk "yes" and "no". This character was improvised while shooting, and wasn't even in the script. Even though he says "no" more than he says "yes", we lovingly named him Mr. Sycophant after a character that had been cut from the first draft.



Greg's next character was the droning Mr. Details, our tribute to Ben Stein.



In his third role, Greg tightened a necktie until he could barely breathe, and played the stammering Mr. Nervous.



The role that took the most preparation in hair and makeup was a silent one. Greg got a large Charles Manson-esque 'X' scarred on his forehead and posed for a photo as the defendant, Mr. Psycho.



Murray's brother Tom stepped in at the last minute to fill the fifth position on the film, and he did a great job in the lead role. Murray said Tom was good at doing a Jimmy Stewart kind of character, so I wrote his part with 'Mr. Smith Goes to Washington' in mind. Tom nailed the part from the beginning.



With more lines in one character than the rest of us had in several characters combined, we probably didn't need to give Tom another role, but he graciously stepped in as the ever-silent Mr. Stressed, whose part was whittled down until he was nothing but background to keep the film inside the 3-minute time limit. Here you see him holding his hat to the left of Greg's Mr. Sycophant.


In the interest of time, we ended up cutting what I thought was one of the funniest bits in the film. For Murray's first character of the night we connected a smoke machine through the back of his suit and gave him a cigarette. He oozed smoke from every fold of his clothing, and sat enshrouded in a thick haze, coughing and complaining that the room was getting too stuffy. Then the silent Mr. Stressed got so irritated with the smoke he poured water on him to put him out. In the editing room we had a lot of cutting to get the film under three minutes, and the smoke machine whined through the shot, so it got the axe.


Additional postings about this film on: January 22, January 19, January 15

Thursday, January 19, 2006

Three Minutes of Fame

Our 3-minute spoof of Twelve Angry Men screened tonight, along with 52 other entries in the 24-hour film marathon.

Greg posted a quicktime version of the film on his site (35MB).

Click here to watch the film.

Additional postings about this film on: January 22, January 20, January 15

Tuesday, January 17, 2006

Go Google Yourself

I got this google vanity game from Julie at Mental Origami who got it from "Alan" who got it from . . .

So I googled the phrase "Jim wants a" and got the following results:


Jim wants a shortstop, so it would make sense.
Because then it would all make sense.

Jim wants a healthy debate about the ideas he is raising.
Because Jim likes people to disagree with him.

Jim wants a word with you.
He wants to know if you play shortstop.

Jim wants a change of pace while he builds a second income.
Because Jim likes multi-level marketers even more than telemarketers.

Jim wants a dolly for his birthday.
Ahem. A refrigerator dolly.

Jim wants a group of UMD undergrads.
Because Jim loves spending time in jail.

Jim wants a live-in english speaker, and preferably has some knowledge of russian.
To translate for the rest of the undergrad exchange students.

Little Jim wants a tool set for Christmas so that he can prove to his father that he is a man.
Because Jim's father is the only one that still might believe it.

JIM WANTS A SHOUT OUT TO ALL HIS HOMIES.
Jim wants the UMD undergraduates to know he's still in touch with his youthful side.

Jim wants a sign on etiquette
We don't swim in your toilet...

Jim wants a ridiculous sum.
But he's worth it.

Jim wants a photographer to follow him and take pics
Later Jim will blackmail himself.

Jim wants a used medical pack
Hopefully it will include some used syringes and dirty scalpels.


I got similarly humorous results by googling "Jim likes to", "Jim is going to", and "Jim doesn't like".

Thanks Julie.

Sunday, January 15, 2006

Twelve Crazy Men

I spent Friday night working on a film for the 24 hour filmmaking contest. They gave everyone a theme, a prop, and a specific line of dialogue that had to be in the film. This year's theme was Mercy. The prop was a candle. The line of dialogue was "I should have." Every team is limited to five people, which must include both cast and crew. The finished film cannot be longer than three minutes.


I joined a team with Murray Triplett, Greg Johnson, Dave Larsen, and Tom Triplett. Murray and Greg had the idea to do a black and white spoof of Twelve Angry Men with each of us playing two or three parts. Murray and I talked over some plot points and some ideas for characters. Then I wrote up a quick script and Murray gave it a quick rewrite. We tried to make every character over-the-top funny.


We met in Bountiful and filmed in a conference room. Everyone took the characters and made them even crazier. Luckily, Dave is a great make-up artist, so we ended up with some funny-looking character roles. I played Mr. Confused and Mr. Rushed. To make my characters distinct, I even agreed to shave my head for one of the parts. Someday maybe I'll collect the 56 bucks people offered to entice me to put razor to scalp.


Mr. Confused Mr. Rushed


Later we edited at Greg's office. The hardest part was packing it all into three minutes. We ended up having to cut some of our favorite bits, and the pacing feels like we were on crack. The film might have been a little stronger if we hadn't been constrained by the time limit, but all in all I think it turned out great. 24 hours is not a lot of time to write, film, edit, and master a project. We had it even tougher than many others because we all worked until 5 on Friday, and Provo is an hour away from us. Still, we had the finished DVD in hand by 8 o'clock Saturday morning. For us it was a 15 hour festival.


Thursday night our film will screen along with the other contest entries at the LDS Festival.


Additional postings about this film on: January 22, January 20, January 19

Sunday, January 08, 2006

Two Days On Set

I spent Thursday and Friday working as a grip. We closed off Gallivan Avenue in downtown Salt Lake and made it look like a busy street of Chicago or New York.



We started the day by having parking enforcement issue tickets to all the cars parked in front of our bagged meters. We got a late start after we finally cleared out the violators.



Director Murray Triplett explains the camera movement he wants.



The traffic disappears and is replaced by a party bus.



The highlight of my day was a shot where the camera jibbed over four lanes of gridlocked traffic. I was operating a smoker and they kept calling "Jim, we can still see you!" The solution was I finally crawled all the way under the car, but I stuck my head out just long enough to have someone take my picture.

Tuesday, January 03, 2006

I Need A Vacation From My Vacation

When I left work the Friday before Christmas, I was filled with more than just the Christmas spirit.  We were closed down the whole week between Christmas and New Years, and I knew this was a great chance to get ahead of my screenwriting schedule.  Without the huge, daily time commitment of my job, I could spend the entire day turning the crank on the scene factory in my skull.  My productivity level would soar.  I might finish an entire draft.


I am back at work now, and can you guess how many words I added over the break?  Yep, you got it on the first guess.  Zero.  I didn't even keep up with the normal page-a-day commitment I stick to when my day job is in session.


My lack of progress was not the result of an overly busy holiday schedule.  The fourteen episodes of Lost I watched on DVD are more than enough evidence that I had some free time.


Lately, life seems to be screaming a principle in my direction, and I think it will keep beating me with the idea until my head absorbs the concept.


Structure.  Structure.  Structure.


The story has to have structure.  My life has to have structure.  I try to fight against following the rules.  After all, I'm artistic, right?


Puh-lease.


Without structure, my story wanders aimlessly and goes nowhere.  Why would I think my life would behave any differently?